Naked on my bed.
Freshly loved,
As he showers.
Aware of my entirety.
As I reach for my robe
A image stops me.
A reflection,
I barely recognized,
a glowing fresh body..
How long had it been
since it looked like this..
freshly flushed and kissed.
Glowing with confidence.
Author notes
Option 1 of course Nice contest Lane
In a list
A contest entry
- 1,000 POINTS...THREE OPTIONS by Dalaney.
1000 points, ended June 9, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shorter The Better! by My Darkness.
400 points, ended July 4, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - lazy contest: pre-write party by DancingRed.
300 points, ended August 10, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A beautifully painted scene of self-discovery and love - I love the ending line. Perhaps you meant 'AN image'.
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed. -
this is excellent...the imagery is immaculate and enthralling...you paint a perfect sensual picture to the reader...bravo!
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That's when a women is most beautiful!
You made me want to see, Baby! Isn't the afterglow of a sweet and sensual night of love one of the best things on earth - if not the best? Nothing makes a man or a women feel more alive than a hot and sultry night of love SWEET love. GOOD LUCK in the contest.
Peace & Love.
Earl.
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Ah, confidence is so sexy on a woman, and the feeling of being happy with oneself and your place in the world, very well written. Best of luck to you in the contest...Scott
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wow, this is sweet... i have had this feeling as well, i haven't stop smiling since the first time i saw my ex, now current, boyfriend in years... great job and good luck!
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Wonderful
Very nicely done. A terrific poem for the contest. -
Nice work
How long had it been
since it looked like this..
freshly flushed and kissed.
Glowing with confidence
This is nice and provokes a blissful image of a woman who see's her real self. Thanks for the read.
terry
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so picturisque
& such a wonderful feeling. something I am looking forward to very soon . Lol But a truly beautiful write. keep on penning dear poet
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beautiful
and original!
a lovely piece!
"Aware of my entirety."
is an ingenious line!
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WoW!This is refreshing!
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Great !!!!!!!!!!!
I must say this is such a wonderful moment you share here...
The way you feld must have bin great
I hope you will feel like this many more times to come
XXJeannette
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This is sheer beauty.
I hope you shared this with him. Letting him know how he makes you feel. The BEST poem of self appreciation I have ever read. I would loved to have seen your beauty, thank you for sharing this confident poem.
Buddy
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I am comenting again I love this poem and it seems fo fit you. excellent like the last time I read it
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This is so beautiful
Very nice imagery comes to my mind of nakedness and feelings while reading this
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Impressive
I wish I had the confidence you did! If I felt like that every time I looked at myself I'd look a hell of a lot more often. You sure did meet Dalaney's requirements though, no vulgarity, or humor here, just beatuiful bare skin presented with well fit words.
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That was a great poem.She must not have seen her body in a long time.Nice structure and rythem I enjoyed this very much.10*heart*s
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This is a 'feel good' write, and I enjoyed it so much. Made me want to say: "It's a great feeling". (Sorry for the old Pearl Drops tooth polish remark...LOL) But it has that kind of freshness to it. Stylin' good write. Good luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda [Only one little typo..."A'n' image stops me"]
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Truly, this is exactly the type of poem for nudity
that I wanted. You have expressed yourself well
and have done it with class and style. Thank you
so much for entering my contest. Love, Lane
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Excellent
A very touching and wonderful write. Full of all the elements of option 1. Good luck in the contest.
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That is a nice confident poem with a great outlook. outstanding. Lots of images here.
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Loved your last line
It was a good clincher for all the other lines. Good luck to you in the contest
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