Your lips are so inviting,
You tempt me with your smile,
I'd rather burn than just desert you,
So I guess I'll stick around a while.
You can take me anyway you want to,
With a curl of your sweet lips,
You turn my bowels to water,
With the swaying of your hips.
(REFRAIN)
Touch me up I'm not protesting,
Kiss me deeply until I cry,
There'll be hell to pay tommorrow,
But for now take me on this high.
You make living seem so empty,
You make love like a crashing train,
You squeeze everything out of me,
With all this exquisite pain.
You can make me turn in circles,
With a crook of one small finger,
Christ! I'd die for one more moment,
Just to let that moment linger.
(REFRAIN)
So be gentle if you want to,
Be as rough as you desire,
I will take it anyway you want,
Then crucify me in your fire...
(REFRAIN & Ad-lib to fade)
Author notes
option# 3
A contest entry
- 1,000 POINTS...THREE OPTIONS by Dalaney.
1000 points, ended June 9, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"So be gentle if you want to,
Be as rough as you desire,
I will take it anyway you want,
Then crucify me in your fire..."
Dammmnnn...Intense penning, Poet...I once wrote the lines, "There should be no woundings in the making of this love." To each his own, I guess. 
Good luck in Lane's contest, my Friend...
Wanda
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Oh, this is good. It flows so easily from one
stanza to the next, and the beat of this is on
tempo. I truly do love the last stanza the best.
Thank you so very much for entering. Love, Lane
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Well done, I liked the easy read and passion in this piece good luck in lane's contest
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