Sugary fruit jewels
explode with a variety
of flavors in my mouth.
Although rather chewy,
I like my snacks gooey...
and fun to squish.
The best part's not always the flavor,
or the rubbery texture;
it's fun to turn your mouth green!
Author notes
I love fruit snacks.....I think I'm addicted...anyway, I hope you enjoyed this jingle. (My first ever...) Turning your mouth blue is fun too....
A contest entry
- Jingle your favorite food for me... by AnotherName.
525 points, ended June 25, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Just say what you feel needs telling...or have one of those random whims to comment on something.
Comments
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I can see a kid saying all this with a mouth full of; "Sugary fruit jewels". LOL This is quite visual! Love the descriptive way this is written. An excellent jingle. Thanks for the entry. Good Luck!
April
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It was fun reading your jingle...liked it
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To tell you the truth, I don't really like it myself.....feels kind of stupid.....but it's great that you like it.
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