The little spider walks
on the counter top
with legs that look like
hair. tumbling around on the
kitchen counter and
into (squeak) the sugar jar
he swims like a beautiful fish in an
icy sea of hail.
i am
so proud of that spider
swimming in there.
A contest entry
- Random, Weird, and Hilarious Contest by writeroftoast.
900 points, ended November 26, 2008, 42 entries
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Comments
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i smiled. yay.
thats good, i likes the squek part and when hes in the sugar jar. i think spiders are icky having bad biting, poisonous run-ins with one, but if hes in the sugar jar, hes ok by me. -
Funny little poem, cute, I liked it. Good luck in the contest.
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You have a very unique way of writing with wonderful imagery too. Lovely work. It's nice to read something a little different like this.
Shaz xx
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That is really cute. I like your poem. I loved the words and everything.
My mum hates spiders we always have to kill them for her or I like to try and glass them to let them outside.
Keep up the goo work your good!
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