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My Friend Next Door

I have a {FRIEND}
And he lives next door.
He tells me of the {END}
He told me he died on the floor.
I {LEARN} of his sad story
All about his {LIFE}.
Hes not another piece of inventory.
He says he died from a {KNIFE}
He tells me of his {ABUSE}
So now he wants {REVENGE}
His mother just lite a fuse.
It was a horrible {CARANAGE}
His mother became furious
When she heard of his father.
Becoming very very {CURIOUS}
She found him {CHEATING}
with another man.
She never knew of his flirting
With people other than {WOMEN}
She was {IRATE}
Cussing, Yelling, Punching, & Kicking.
She was just trying to {DEFLATE}
She threw anything & everything.
Thats when things got out of {HAND}
She grabbed a {KNIFE}
and was a {DEADLY} weapon in her hand.
She took every single {LIFE}
So thats the story of my friend.

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i dont think its done...but its a start... any ideas?

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  • emoteen2009
    June 5, 2007
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    omg its very good email me joeycastillo at hotmail ok good i like it