Coffee
Cup contains
Calming caffeine concoction
In a list
A contest entry
- Alliterative Haynaku Contest by Billbard.
450 points, ended June 9, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 2 or 3 lines ONLY ANYTHING GOES! by Florida Sunshine.
450 points, ended June 24, 2007, 113 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Review Requested
Comments
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I adore you so much for this is such a very brilliant piece...and yes indeed your coffee's aroma is under all our nose already...well-brewed...I mean well-done!!!
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second-born
Thank you so much for your kind comments. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.
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Polly, Great illiteration at work in this poem. I can almost smell the wonderful aroma.
Dennis
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Haiku-bless-you
Thank you so much for your comments. they are appreciated and I am glad that you enjoyed this write.
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YES YES YES coffeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~ Gotta have it! LMAO! Thanks for entering my contest!
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Malicai
Will that be with cream and sugar or just black. I know the feeling, expecially in the morning. GIVE ME COFFEE!!!!
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I enjoyed reading your fine entry into my Alliterative Haynaku Contest very much.I hope you enjoyed writing it as well
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Billbard
Thank you for the comments and the honorable mention. This was a fun contest to enter and I thank you for hosting it.
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Now that looks good! And the Haynaku is great also!
Good luck in the contest, you picked a great letter and topic!
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Susie
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. And have a cup of coffee on me.
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