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Darkness
Drowns dogs
Doing dirty deeds

Author notes

METAPHORS:

dogs: people
dirty deeds: sinning
darkness drowning: hell swallowing

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  • Billbard silver member
    June 9, 2007

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    Thank you very much for your entry in my Alliterative Haynaku Contest.I hope you enjoyed writing your poem as much as I did reading it.


  • FallingTwilight
    June 3, 2007

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    I like it. Nice metaphors.

    Have a wonderful day and good luck in the contest,

    FallenPoeticAngel