The living plastic dolls
are here to be your friends.
they do better at being what you're not,
you are my best friend til the end.
We laugh together and enjoy,
and I pretend there's nothing wrong.
All you do is put on your plastic face,
and I just play along.
I'll be here for you,
no matter the but's and fights,
I don't [do] care at all.
Just smile... it'll be alright.
But I have a secret to tell you
I want to threaten you with a knife
and watch you beg for mercy...
That's right, we're best friends for life.
Author notes
releasing tension...I hate all my "friends" i just feel so out of place. I hope things get better.
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800 points, ended June 26, 2007, 138 entries
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Very good poem, and so full of emotion! I hope things get better for you as well
-Bella
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intense
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time heals all...
things always get better with time. remember: your focus always determines your realities, as well as your destiny. great penning! urafinalist! -
Amazing write.
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Wow.
I can feel your emotion in this poem.
The message behind this is strong.
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lovely!!!absolutely lovely.i love the way the end became dark threaten you with a knife and watch you beg for mercy.thats lovely
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Really fine! Like it a lot!
Totally cool, fine writing...
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YOU WIN!!!!!
YOU ROCK LITTLE ONE!!!
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what did i win?
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holy crap. its good. i wrote one like it kind of...
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lol..thanks
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