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To Gary Dakota

Enter into the world of dream,
flowing like the water in a stream.
Mystical magical enchanting places
that leave your mind wanting more.

Ride upon the winged-dragon,
with fire flaming from it's mouth.
Walk through the forest with the flying fairies,
rest upon the giant mushrooms.

Become the magical wizard in his wisdom,
raising a baby boy.
Be the prince saving his princess
from her loneliness in the castle tower.

So much to see. So much to do.
Anything you want to be.
The most beautiful person in the world
held in the arms of your mother.


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  • Namita
    August 4, 2007
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    Wonderful poem for children. Thanxx for sharing,

    Luv,
    Candy
    Contest Holder


  • Kimojuno
    June 8, 2007

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    Lovvvvvvvve It

    ^-^;

    "So much to see. So much to do.
    Anything you want to be.
    The most beautiful person in the world
    held in the arms of your mother."

    That must be my favorite part, I really enjoyed the whole of the poem, but _that_ was just beautiful. It really shows the whole of the poem, how sweet and loving it is, and how it is about a mother's love for her child, and showing that in the end that love, and bond, between Mother and Child, are the most beautiful things in the world.

    Great write, and I agree you didn't have to personalize it for him, but that was really very sweet of you to do.

    Good job, and congrats on the trophy. ^-^


  • zillion
    June 3, 2007
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    First off, I wanted to thank you so much for your entry. I know it will mean a lot to both the baby and his mother. Also, thanks for personalizing it for him, it was very ncie for you to take the time to make something especially for him. It's very sweet.

    -Zill