Blush me filled to asking
with the whipped cream of desire
I'm spent to whirl and spin
in warming roars of blazing fire
You ignite my spirit
And lend streams of delight
To a flower that won't blossom
Lest be stroked in tender night
Awe enraptures all my senses
implores me to succumb
I snap back into reality
with emotions numb
You're a daydream of my past-life
Been gone for many years
I'm in love with sweetest memory
As I drown in my own tears
A contest entry
- Love & Commitment by Heavenly Angel.
500 points, ended June 10, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very Good
I am normally not attracted to rhyme
This is very well done and softly unforced
The fire in the meaning lights the words up
You did well to create this
Rick
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Wonderfully and beautifully worded this is!
I think this is an amazing entry in the contest! Thank you so much for sharing!
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