What is love?
Is it when someone cares about you?
When you know you have fun with?
Or can be that you care about someone so much
That you’re wily to feel their pain
Can it be the way they make you smile?
What is love?
It is when you know you can share your commons
But can enjoy their difference.
When you plan to share your life with her
Know that you can’t find another
Even when you tried so hard
Love is?
She is like diamond that can’t be replaced
No one comes close so I won’t even try to find another
Just give me your hand and tell me its fine.
That am going to be your other.
A contest entry
- MY FIRST CONTEST: I WANT LOVE RIGHT NOW. PREWRITES ALLOWED...COME IN AND CHECK OUT by the-gifted.
600 points, ended September 26, 2007, 108 entries
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Comments
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I loved this poem very much. I specially loved that line "she is like diamond that cant be replaced" and I basicly love that last stanza and whoever you wrote tht for must be a very special grl. This was a very sweet poem
VEry nice.
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aww, this is very sweet. great write you nailed it. thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.
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i loved it, its s o beautiful, u are too sweet, and thats why ur mine
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I love this poem. I love the line:
She is like diamond that can’t be replaced
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