Melt away these words, because they’re always wrong.
Take away these scars, they’re never going to help.
Scratch it all away, the words on the wall.
Cry forever, because nothing will help.
Slowly being intoxicated by you and your darkness.
Somehow I feel you in here.
The words across your lips, that told me, to go and die.
The words off your letter, that sent shivers up and down my spine.
The day is coming, I know I will win
Fighting in the end, killing in the end.
Just another day, just another way.
You can’t keep the secrets but you can keep the lies,
Kill me, and want me, and hate me because it’s over.
Melt away the words that are never coming back.
Take away the words, which I heard and hated.
Take away my pain, let me heal.
Try to help me, you’re only making it worse.
Try to save me, you’re only saving yourself.
Author notes
I wrote this back in the begining of the school year(november?)
Please tell me what you think
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this truly awesome..,. i liked every bit of it... every line and every thought... keep on penning... this was or the other.. hehehe
PEACE
******JOWELL*****
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wow this totally rocked good job I loved it there was just something there that made it flow together
Des
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wow this is really good...... i really like the occasional rhyming pattern and just the whole theme and way of it......... i especially love the strong ending...
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This is
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This was really deep. It kinda reminds me of some of the stuff going on in my life right now... you really have a frank way of putting things. I like it. Nice one,
~Anne
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this is intersting.i almost see to different poems here as in a double personality,but then again i see where it could be that of a letter to a would be significant other.nevertheless good write
H.
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