We fly each night in shear delight
neath the shining moon and stars
with beating wings our soul does sing
as we glide the night on high
But with the dawn the beauties gone
for the day cannot conceal
what man has done beneath the sun
his legacy revealed
For we can see the tragedy
of a wounded world below
for they bring pain with their reign
such is man's arrogance and folly
Please tell me what you think
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i love this poem, you did an excellent job writing it's truth's so beautifully.
peace&love.
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Thanks child! We are doing so much damage to our environment. Hopefully we're not to late to fix it.
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you do havean excellent flow...
Thank you for the evening read here....
and's for you as well....
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Thanks for the kind words and visit. And the smiles as well!
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this is a terriffic piece of poetry and it rings all too ture. i feel the words written on this page as man's folly will be our destruction in due time, sad, so sad.
be well and be blessed
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Thanks for the visit lady!
I hope all is well with you also. It is sad what we are doing. I just hope it isn't to late to fix it.
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This was catchy and interesting. Shor tand to the point, I liked it. I liked your line, "For the day cannot conceal/what man has done beneath tha sun." Very intersting.
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Thanks IlluminatiDame. We cannot hide in the light of day what we have done. So better try and make things right,
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Wonderful Poem !!!!
Hello Rob, You have penned a wonderful poem here. Lovely imagery. You words are so true. It is so sad what man has done to God's creation Earth. Thanks for sharing this great poem. You take care my friend, Sandy
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thanks sandy! We sure have made a mess of it so far. We need to do a whole lot better thats for sure. I always look forward to your visits sandy.
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Hello Rob
You are very welcome my friend. I enjoy stopping by and visiting. Hope you are having a great day. Sandy
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A great write! You've painted many astounding images, and made a terrific point as well. Man's legacy of destroying everything we touch... If only more people felt the same.
Melui
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Melui I agree! Hopefully someday we will learn our lesson. Hopefully before its to late. Thanks for the visit!
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a very interesting poem.i loved the last stanza and espcially the last two lines.it contains a deep sense of sadness of what has donbe in his rise to dominance of this beautiful world.good write.
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Thanks H. I'm amazed at our arrogance! When will we change our ways eh?
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most likely the day we wipe each other out over some petty and foolish act is what i think.
what do you think?
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Great job! I like it. Great job and I hope you keep writing! ^_^
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Thanks sadura! I will do my best!
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