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I want to watch a movie

I want to watch a movie.
A movie of deceit
and laughter
and lies
A movie of lust
A movie of romance
A movie thats dead inside of us all

I want to watch a movie
something to believe in

I want something to believe in
I want to hear whats on the other side of twilight
I want to hear something thats never been heard before.

I want to believe in a dream
A Dream
A Dream thats only been dreamed by few.
One day we'll live among ourselves
Naked in our minds with honesty in our bones
The nudity of reality will tear down our walls.

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  • Under i
    June 12, 2007

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    To believe in anything is a powerful feat. To hold a though close to you is great. Possibly one day the shadows will recede, and we will see ourselves and our society for what it is. Great work


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    June 12, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Belief and hope is sometimes all that we are able to hold on to. To watch our lives unfold, and the lives of others, and to see if it goes the way that we need it to and want it to even more...

    Faerie - Site Greeter


  • Poetic Rage
    June 4, 2007

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    Seeking More

    Great Work The thought of many places beyond earth or any of the planets.Beyond our minds to a place where imagination is real and we could live it each and every day...

    We could dream of a live that would not be a dream no more but more as our daily lifes...

    To be the one that seeks more then what we have now the one that seeks the impossible beyond the reach of man beyond the reach of our minds and beyond the reach of our internal beings..

    Amazing Write....


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 3, 2007

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    Interesting

    Oh we all dream of having the ultamate dream one that can free us of all doubts but for now knowing that dream is on its way makes us endure the moment at hand