Colors
Hues of passion,
painting crimson dreams of
desire, traced in endless strokes
that awaken shades of love. Brushing my
canvas with impressions, in one
kiss, memories highlight,
yearning, for more
Colors
Author notes
Option #3
Pic: Google search/www.profile/myspace.com/kiss.bmp
Anonymous contest
A contest entry
- Battle Of The Muse. Fighting With Ink: {ROUND ONE} by PerfectImperfection.
900 points, ended June 20, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Colours. I love that thought. You've penned a lovely poem of love, without slipping in to any cliches. I agree with PerfectImperfection though - some of the line breaks seem a little off. Also, I'm fairly sure I counted 50 syllables, not 55.
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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A lovely entry; as I do appreciate the rictameter form. The lines seem to break in awkward places, though still a fine piece. Thank you for entering & Best wishes in the contest!
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Excellent
Linda this was a beautiful poem and the form i am really begining to get interested in I have tried this form and know just how much work goes into them. Wishing you all the best in this contest Brian.
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beautiful
Such a lovely piece , my Dear friend...
You amaze me with your versatility and creativity..
This one is flawless and lovely!
Bravo! and g/l in the contest!
Lynda:g
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