My body tenses, my breaths become short,
This is one battle that I have never before fought.
A short intake of breath, as the surfaces slowly touch,
My heart is racing - this doesn’t surprise me much.
I kiss your red lips, touch your smooth face,
I close my eyes and relax as you return the embrace.
I pull up the cover, bringing it close to our chin,
Feeling so childish, not knowing how to begin.
My hands find your hips, hidden in the tangle of covers,
I pull you closer as we kiss like forbidden lovers.
Your hands run down my back, as you look me in the eye,
I kiss you once more, my hand runs up your thigh.
I take my time, as I start to slowly thrust,
You gently squeeze my back, as if it hurts to much.
I kiss you once more, wiping away a tear,
Wanting to keep you safe, and away from fear.
I start to speed up, quenching this thirst,
Neither makes a sound, being each other’s first.
We come together, a mix of tears and joy,
The result of love, between a girl and a boy.
A contest entry
- Make Love To Me Guys ( Males Only) by theredcatjazzoflove.
400 points, ended June 3, 2007, 17 entries
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My hands find your hips, hidden in the tangle of covers,
I pull you closer as we kiss like forbidden lovers.
Your hands run down my back, as you look me in the eye,
I kiss you once more, my hand runs up your thigh.
I take my time, as I start to slowly thrust,
You gently squeeze my back, as if it hurts to much.
I kiss you once more, wiping away a tear,
Wanting to keep you safe, and away from fear.
I start to speed up, quenching this thirst,
Neither makes a sound, being each other’s first.
We come together, a mix of tears and joy,
The result of love, between a girl and a boy.
wel hello there i just read this very well delivered piece. i really liked it and your rhyming was very well targeted. nice nice nice you put a few twist to this piece I liked it. -
Absolutly BEAUTIFUL and stunning
great jod, with words and imagery!!!
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