I once was found but
Now I’m lost
Floating through this hell that goes on for an
Eternity
Can’t you come and rescue me before it’s
The
End
Don’t you remember I used to be that
Girl with gap toothed grin
Really sweet
And innocent
Come bring me back to her
Even though I’m an infected animal now
Author notes
acrostic, infected grace, option
A contest entry
- ღMuffled Screams&Stolen Innocenceღ ||pt.2|| by XXBrunettexBarbieXX.
450 points, ended June 20, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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This was a great write...I can relate to this poem alot and your feeling of loneliness and depression...it sounds to me like you are hiding alot deep inside of yourself...I enjoyed reading this poem and can relate to it alot..but i suggest that you just fix the formating so that if flows a little better and isn't so choppy..I can give you some pointers if you want just let me know
keep writitng your very talented...thank you for entering my contest and good luck hun
~Chrissy~
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