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Everybody Better Be Gone or Asleep

We had been working all day long.

  The play was to say so long.

The beauty was there was no harm.

  She was to come when everyone was gone.

There was a fire drill she didn't know.

  She came in and stole the show.

The camera was left on that is how we knew.

  The little fairy did her dance and petals flew.

Then no one came for quit a while.

  She sat patiently with a smile.

Before she started from the curtains she peaked.

  Be quiet everybody you better be gone or asleep.

 

That night when the play was through.

  The lights went down.

The child was there on the screen.

  Her beauty was beyond belief.

We had her up front to take a bow.

  She just laughed and said I stole the show.

I praticed so very hard.

  I was a fairy I though no one could see.

 

6-3-2007

 

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  • AngelDreamer
    June 24, 2007
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    this is a great poem and so verry simple, yet perfect. amazing flow and good luck in my contest


  • intanglio2ring
    June 3, 2007

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    Very Special!

    Oh the joys of childhood's first act!
    All nervous and giddy!
    Very nice presentation!
    The best to you in the contest!
    Tang