Screaming voices in my head
When I chose to listen
Dust and flowers in my room
From long lost made decision
Poetry so ignorant
Lying in the dark
Can you feel my heart beating
As I let these tears fall
I've heard the words relax
Whispered in my ears
I want to scream and shout and burn
Pretty diamond in the rough
Not here in this head
You probably won't even be able to find glitter coated rocks
Death has made my mind sick
Confused hate is an emotion I have felt
But it seems to have abandonned me now
Please just kill me and let me free
This mind is tainted
It makes me want to lie down and drown
I don't know what brought this on
But my mind seems to be feeling a little wrong
Maybe the butterflies I once beheld
As a small part of my own beauty
Suddenly did die
What does it matter anymore
I'm crying out of control
I don't want to feel this pain
Yet look at me
I'm a wreck
I twist and turn in my sleep
And slip in and out of sadness
What is wrong with me
Author notes
option 7- death, screaming, confused, ignorant, dust, glitter, burn
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Comments
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good write.i loved the mention of butterflies.thats an awesome way to mention a scorned love/ended relationship.so not cliche.way to go!(watch me saying that make it turn into something cliche).lol
good luck in the contest and
blessings,
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wow impressive write, very dark and powerful, i love how u ended it and the light ryme scheme, well written thanx for entering xxx
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