I'm a princess and I love
To be the centre of attention.
I'm a teacher and I love
Aiding students' comprehension.
I'm a kind friend and I love
To ease my loved ones' tension.
I'm an individual and I love
Being a mistress of reinvention!
In a list
A contest entry
- lets do this by AngelDreamer.
433 points, ended June 24, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulation On the Gold Impressive write
Simply wonderful piece my dear,
LISA
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Congrats on the gold my friend
Have already applauded it earlier 
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great poem, verry simple and nice flow, the first one in this contest i have added to the fianalists, great job and good luck
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Wow! Thank you so much! I can't believe you gave me gold!!! But I'm very pleased! It was your title that did it! Thanks again!
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Again Nose, I find a slight problem with flow.
Also, how many lovers do you have (loved ones' tension)?
Just being pedantic and joking!
R. -
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Oh, so many lovers!!! NOT! Just an ex whom I still love. Very sad!
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I love this its simple and wonderful,
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great write
nice to see the variety of you in your activities and work. Sound like you are a most interesting person. I wish you success and much happiness.
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GOOD
THIS IS A REALLY GOOD WRITE I LIKE IT...IT SHOWS LOVE HAS NO LIMITS IN A WAY.... I LIKE IT.. YOUR POETRY IS VERY GOOD!!!! GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST -
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Im not a big fan of repetition but nevertheless the message you're conveying outweighs more. keep penning
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Your rhyme works really well, the poem flows well because of it. Such a sweet message.
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This is another very good write
I like the way the form is set out and I wish you well in this contest
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I like it. The rhyming was very good.
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thtere is something uncomfortable about this poem, but I cant quite put my finger on it. The flow is a little jagged. I like the subject, it's very cute. Thank you for sharing.
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