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[ Lordy, Lordy what a guy ]

Lordy, Lordy what a guy
He kissed me once, he kissed me twice
The moment he said “his only one”
Damn, I knew I should’ve ran

Lordy, Lordy what a man
He said he’s give me life & limb
Left me standing with a beggar’s plead
I’ll pay him back for his dark deed

Lordy, Lordy what a coward
Standing in the corner shoutin’
He seems so scared it’s just a knife
But you wish you’d done me right

Lordy, Lordy bless that soul
Blood & gore all on the floor
He looked better than he ever had
I don’t feel a damn bit bad

Lordy, Lordy what a corpse
He won’t be sleeping around no more
Now, this cheater’s laid to rest
His piece of ass gets her’s next

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  • witkat
    June 3, 2007

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    Wow - it makes something quite comical about something rather serious. Maybe with a continued rhyme scheme it would be better. just a suggestion though...