Can you see him? No! Can you?
I'm not sure with the rain in my eyes.
I know he's there I can feel it in my heart.
Why is he so hard to see?
Just believe!
Author notes
Picture inspired. Two young girls
standing in the rain
one holding an umbrella
as they both look to the sky.
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration - 5 Lines or Less by AliceinPoetryLand.
475 points, ended June 3, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good write.
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Beautiful,
You captured the picture perfectly. I can imagine this conversation between these two children, one older than the other, discussing God...beautiful write!
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Oh this is truly precious. I love this. Thank you so much for this beautiful entry.
Gaylene
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