A kiss on the lips, a mark on the neck
Never stopping, marks to wreck
A nibble on the ear, a kiss on the cheek
Touch so firm, knees to weak
Hustling things that make me squirm
Loving the feeling, to many to confirm
Loving you for what you do
The way I feel when I'm with you
Secluded thoughts of my past
Love heading our way, way to fast
A shake of your hand- to the love of your heart
Things you love, evil and good torn apart
Dragging you into something you'll hate
Took you so fast, that now it's to late
In this relationship that leads to hell
Cast once again under my torturous spell
Author notes
I dont know if it is dirty pretty
Option one
Your Heart Is My Symphony
I chose a title for my option
A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty Glitter by Lyre-Bird-.
480 points, ended June 23, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable winner
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this was neat, thanks for entering, and youre like wayyyy cool because you actually followed the rules.
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Although the rhmye and flow of this piece is of a good standard it is bordering on the lines of dirty pretty poetry which is really not my favourite read. Sorry, I'm not saying there is anything wrong with that style. It's just not my kind of thing. Good luck in future contests though.
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I loves it!!! Reminds me of previous situations...
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wow. i really enjoyed this poem The rhyme is awesome. You are very talented =) keep up the awesome work!
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good job. well written. i like the rhyme scheme a lot!
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hey my sista commented too! sweeeeet... lol. i have no idea what dirty pretty is either. i like the poem. good job.
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I like it...Nice job. I like the rhyming a lot! Good luck in the contest you entered! I don't really know what dirty pretty is so...lol...!
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