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Gift Of Freedom



 

 

Our heart can take us on paths unknown
As we take those leaps of faith
Many times we have walked alone
Confused with thoughts, we escape

Over flowing, abundant love
Would purge those fears you share
Hope can lead, to a path thereof
Embraced by arms that care

It is said, that love, when so true
Enhances, all that we are
If you're secure, it will help you through
Any thing, that leaves you marred

Precious unity of love combines
Two minds, then souls, into one
Together nurturing, with years defined
Always blossoming, as it begun

Love is life, beyond a dream
Cherished and treasured, should be
Exceeding all, your expectations supreme
Will make you feel… so free












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  • PerfectImperfection
    June 9, 2007

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    What a divine piece of pure tranquility. To be thankful for the life you live, the love you share, the very air that we breathe... *sigh* You have such a beautiful way about you - your words - and the emotions they bring. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful write!


  • jasminerose
    June 4, 2007
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    Thank you!

    Hi Brian
    Thank you so very much for you very beautiful comment and I do agree with you that love is the path to all happiness
    Thank you again Brian, always wonderful to hear from you
    Linda


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    June 4, 2007

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    Excellent

    A beautiful poem indeed my dear friend. Love is the path I feel to all happieness, without love we just drift in a void of lonieness. wishing you all the best in this contest Brian.


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    June 3, 2007
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    Ab soul ute perfection!!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 3, 2007

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    Sigh....
    Jazzy, this is just....wow! I don't have adequate words to tell you how beautiful I think this piece is!
    Love is an awesome,magical, and wonderful feeling; changes lives and enriches them...
    You captured all the feelings well!
    All the very best in this contest, hon!

    • jasminerose
      June 3, 2007
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      WOW.. I wowed you!! Thank you!!!!!!!.. that is all you needed to say Sandy!!
      As always, I love hearing your thoughts on my poetry!!!
      Jazzy


  • JoyfulWriter
    June 3, 2007

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    Absolutely beautiful! I loved this take on the picture.....gives so much amazing images to the reader....thanks so much for entering my contest...Good luck! Smiles, Terry

    • jasminerose
      June 3, 2007
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      Thank you Terry, for the very inspirational picture contest you offered
      Your compliment is just lovely.. thank you so much!!!
      Linda


  • poet2angels gold member
    June 3, 2007

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    beautiful

    This is breathtaking from start to finish, my dear friend...
    Such a lovely outlook on love and the way it should be...
    Flawless rhyme and flow as always....
    Breathtaking!


    Lynda

    • jasminerose
      June 3, 2007
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      Awwwwwww Thank you dear friend There ya go again, putting that great big smile on my face
      Thank you for such a lovely compliment on my poem and I do agree with you completely!!
      Jazzy

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