Baby's
blissful babbles
bubble bath begins
Author notes
The Haynaku is a three line, six word poem. Line one,1 word, line two, 2 words, line three, 3 words. No syllable or rhyme requirements.For this contest all words MUST start with the same letter.The poem must make sense to me.
A contest entry
- Alliterative Haynaku Contest by Billbard.
450 points, ended June 9, 2007, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you very much for your excellent entry in the Alliterative Haynaku Contest.I enjoyed reading it.I hope that you enjoyed it as much writing it
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Beautufully expressed
Babies are so sweet. (Lisa)
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Aww so gorgeous
Great Haynaku.
All the best in the contest.
Gaylene
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Awwwwwwww...so cute!!! Really enjoyed this! I love watching babies, they are adorable! We have a little kid come visit us with her parents(who work at our place) every alternate day. I look forward to her coming over for she is such a delight! She loves water and is forever in the tub or holding a bottle and she calls water by the name "mum mum"...he he..
Loved the imagery of your haynaku!
All the best,
Charishma
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Ooooooooo... this sent a wonderful image. Kind of a tongue twister and I love it!
Love,
Amera ♥
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Sorry, got the submit button before the applaud one!
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very nice! I think the follow-up stanza would have to start with 'S'--splashing, slippery etc!
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