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  • Billbard silver member
    June 9, 2007

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    Thank you muchly for your fine entry in the Alliterative Haynaku Contest.I enjoyed reading it and I hope that you enjoyed writing it.


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    June 3, 2007
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    LOL...Good one! Aren't those birdies a delight? I love feeding birds and we are blessed to have some very wonderful birds come and visit us. We have cats, chameleons, had labradors but they passed away, and I miss 'em. Anyways, this is a pretty haynaku that has lovely imagery and a brilliant aha in L3 which reminds me so much of haiku!

    Goodluck,
    Charishma


    • Mirthryl
      June 3, 2007
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      Thank you! I'm new to haiku, so I appreciate your encouragement very much.

      Blessings,
      Mirthryl


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 2, 2007
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    I like it. I love finches