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Wickedly Understanding

Your life is yours,
each individual scenario,
filled with surprises
      heartbreak
      love
      and people.
Everyone has different problems,
but it's hard to get by alone.
Talk to me. I understand.
I understand that you need to vent
      talk it out
      complain
      or hear yourself talk.

Like in the time,
Before the Wizard of Oz,
when the wicked witch of the west,
      was kind
      heartbroken
      and lost,
she needed someone
to hear her story.
So now, I am here
      to listen
      and understand
      so that someone
      feels loved.

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The "wickedly" part of my name is in connection with "Wicked" the Musical, which is an add on to the Wizard of Oz.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    June 6, 2007
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    Nicely written, but the Wizard of Oz reference is strange, and your author's comments are even stranger, which leads me to believe this was a previous Wiz of Oz contest entrant. It was probably fantastic for that contest, but it doesn't stand alone too well, at least for me. Thank you for entering the contest.

    whisper


    • WickdlyUndrstanding
      June 7, 2007
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      You asked me to explain my name.
      One of which I picked because of the Broadway musical "Wicked". I understand that it is a little out of place, but I felt that I needed to include it if I were to explain my name.
      [My picture is of Wicked]
      But Thanks, I appreciate the honesty =]
      ~WU


  • My Darkness
    June 3, 2007

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    i like this.. although i'm not a huge wizard of oz fan, it's obviously a huge thing that's impacted a lot of people and i like that.. great write, and name, and good luck to you!


  • The Existentialist
    June 3, 2007
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    shweeeet!


  • reckless abandon
    June 3, 2007
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    yay katie! nice poem.

    -KP]

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