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Dancing in Light

I can hear the music
It plays softy as every one pairs with someone
But I'm in the garden
I don't like to dance to a slow song
I never had really

I stare into the stary night sky
And see a Full silver moon
That illuminates the entire garden
Suddely a voice reaches my ears
And I turn to see
A Tall guy with brownish/blondish hair
Looking at me

"Do you wanna dance?"
He asks as he holds out his hand
"Sure."
I said and took his hand

We began to dance
To the beat of the music
I was to focused on his eyes
To relize I could actually dance

The song slowed even more
And I laid my head on his shoulder
As he rested his hands on my waist

I felt like I was in heaven
As we danced
Suddenly he lifted my chin up
And looked me right in the eyes

My breath cought in my throat
As he placed his lips on mine
I was shocked at first
But slowly I closed my eyes
And kiss him back

I let the stranger into my heart
But yet
He seems so familary to me
And I don't now why

His arms around my waist tighten
As I rapped my arms around his neck
But all good thing come to an end

The music stopped
And we pulled apart
Both of us blushing

But he didn't let go of me
And that was fine by me
As we stared at the silver moon

Slowly he lowered his had to whisper in my ear
"The moon is shining brightly. Its like we were dancing in the light
Instead of a dimly lit room."
I smiled at the thought
"Yea I suppose you right. Dancing in the light"

Author notes

this was a combo of the 1st, 3nd, and 5th option! lol

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  • Tali28
    June 16, 2007
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    What a great night. Very sweet. I liked this alot. Good descriptions. Good luck to you in the contest. Take care.
    Tali


  • Teddibly Abnormal
    June 7, 2007

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    oh my god~ oh my god! oh my god~ i am so envious of you and your romantic night!!
    it was so vivid that i was like standing, watching you two, and was screaming in my mind NO FAIR~ but not wanting to ruin the moment. and then BOOM i was like "hey, it's not really happening!"

    seriously, usually i have trouble reading a poem ALL the way through, but with your poems... zap!


  • Tali28
    June 3, 2007

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    Thanks

    Thank you for your entry. I will return when the contest ends to give you my thoughts and comments.
    Tali