Forget thinking about just some snack to eat
when we can offer you an eternal treat,
with fashion tasteful and oh so very neat,
of which no silly bag of chips can compete,
by getting our coffin that sings truly sweet
including motors to move your cold dead feet,
forever dancing six feet under all that peat.
A contest entry
- Jingle your favorite food for me... by AnotherName.
525 points, ended June 25, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a futuristic ad of sorts. LOL Don't know if we'd be ordering one of these for the living or the dead? I think those of us still hanging onto threads of life would get more out of it than the one passed on. LOL This left a serious mental picture in my mind. Thank you for entering my contest. Good Luck!
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Thank you for the great comment.
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Love it!
You're crazy, you know that...
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Hmmm, wonder if that would be considered as dancing in the "spirit" er sole?
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You mean you won't think this a bargain?
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Well, it could keep a person in circulation, I suppose...
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Going out in style!
You sure do know how to sale it..
Great write..Got one in a XL..LOL..
Good luck, Brenda
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Thank you for the great comment and for this kind of purchase it is one size fits all.
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You sure do go for the extraordinary lol But does it really need advertising? I mean we'll all end up there anyway lol
Great write. Loved it!
should the word 'complete' be 'compete'?
All the best with this. I'm dying to see how you go
Gaylene
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Thank you Gaylene for the great comment. And even though complete was what I wanted I liked compete better. Yep, I do strive to reach for the different kind of consumer.
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rofl - you're too good - this is wonderful!!
I love reading what you'll write next !! B
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Thanks Betsy. Yep, why offer just the ordinary huh?
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