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memories of a well

Calling memories
Gazing deeply into well
speaking to echoes
of my bygone days of love
fills heart as water in cup

For feelings linger
like locust on evening breeze
remembrance pleases
and comes to  the gentle mind
like embrace of an old friend


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  • ennovy silver member
    June 4, 2007

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    Amazingly Heartfelt

    This gave me a short trip down memory lane, about love and friendship. You master this from well also.
    excellent writing..........novy


  • Nicolette gold member
    June 3, 2007

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    You give us so much to ponder and sigh on with this lovely double tanka. The tanka originated in an age of romantism and your poem reflects that too. I so love this form as well. Lovely poetry.

    ~ Nicolette


  • katscradle
    June 2, 2007
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    THANK YOU


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 2, 2007

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    Gentle breezes of an older memory...mine are haunting I do not wish to ever look back. Some memories are best left to die! Nice poem though! ~Sie


  • Cannonsfire
    June 2, 2007

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    Tanka's now, when will it end? lol Your talent always is a delight and a surprise. This is just lovely. Love, C

  • Rowan gold member
    June 2, 2007

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    ah..like a sigh, very nice.


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    June 2, 2007
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    You're doing well with these tankas, keep it up! La x

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