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Cannon's Wish

Wished someday for love
reflected in  loving gaze
someday now arrived
Heaven descended, kind eyes
reaching out to touch her soul

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for my friend Cannonsfire who found love

In a list

A contest entry

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    June 5, 2007

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    Thank you for your wonderful entry...very romantic, short and sweet...great thoughts glad you found her in the end "Heaven descended, kind eyes" Loved this line...have a wonderful day, Ken IBT

  • saddie23
    June 5, 2007

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    pretty

    This is such a pretty little tanka u have here. My fav. lines: Heaven descended, kind eyes
    reaching out to touch her soul
    An spiritual romance, is such praise of romance. Good luck in the contest. Saddie23


  • ennovy silver member
    June 4, 2007

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    Eloquent, Emotional, Lovely

    This so beautiful, to read of love blooming, taking root and growing...Glad she found it, my friend
    Cannonsfire is happy I know with this sweet write about her.......excellent tribute to a friend...novy


  • Lost Raindrops
    June 4, 2007

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    Such a sweet dedication you have presented for your friend
    A very loving and giving part of your heart you have shared!
    Good luck to you!
    Des


  • ScarletO gold member
    June 3, 2007
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    A very nice feeling resides within your tanka, a specialness of how another can make us feel.


  • Perception 5
    June 3, 2007
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    A lovely poem. Good luck


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 3, 2007
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    How sweet this is! Wish you all the very best


  • esroddo silver member
    June 3, 2007
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    Well applauded

    Beautiful dedication well written good luck (Lisa)


  • Griswold silver member
    June 3, 2007
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    Wonderful dedication to one who you admire,very well written,good luck in the contest...Scott


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    June 3, 2007

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    Beautiful

    A terrific Tanka and a delightful dedication. Oh this was so good. Best of luck in this contest. ~Pamela


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 2, 2007

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    Reflected in a gaze, somdeday now has arrived! kind eyes that touch her soul. Lovely poem! ~Sie


  • Cannonsfire
    June 2, 2007

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    You make me smile when you do this for me I do treasure your friendship and how you feel. Love, C


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    June 2, 2007

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    This is pretty and expresses a deep love and respect for that someone special in your life. Thanks for sharing. La x


  • thelordreigns gold member
    June 2, 2007

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    Very romantic and touching. I am happy for your happiness.

    Love and hugs - joanne

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