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Romance tweens Queens
Knights and Scores blend
When the Fire Burns dim
Sorcerer Merlin will wake
Gemstones and Cobalt sit
Waiting to be Summoned
the aura of strength floats
and Settles on the viewers
Illuminated between gasps
the Music drifts and beats
Lagoons of Mystic Exploit
Close your Eyes and Feel
Archimedes may poke but
Feel his long feathers
Do so and Pulse the Feel
Merlin chose Him for Rest
Do Shield Yourself Now
Surging From the Corner
Power stakes the Magics
Legend has started Work
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A contest entry
- Allpoetry One Year Anniversary Contest by Tali28.
900 points, ended June 17, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great write. I love the fantasy, the style and the flow. Thanks for share this piece with me. Giid luck to you in the contest. Take care.
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thank you for hosting.
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this poem is really cool
i really like it
your an awesome poet
good luck in the contest
your super crazy
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i'm crazy?
thanks.
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beautiful and imaginative journey, rather spiritual; as it reminds me of tennyson's idyles of the king.
quite beautiful!!
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tennyson?? ~you flatter~
thank you so
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Awsome!
this was great miko! i felt like i was actually there 4 some strange and abserd reason lol! i got issues i know
Romance tweens Queens
Knights and Scores blend
When the Fire Burns dim
Sorcerer Merlin will wake
that was my fav part for some reason lol issues i know!
good luck in the contest and i hope you win something!
~scooby~
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Thanks
Thank you for your entry. I will be back after the contest to comment further.
Tali
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