I sit starring towards the sky,
Wondering where do i belong and why.
For there is no place in this world for me,
The only similarity we have is if and when i bleed.
People grow and throughout life seperate,
Looking for that one special mate.
But where to I belong when I feel so lost,
As if being a loner is my final cost.
I sit here and start to ponder this,
If I had to leave what things would i miss.
Then I ask myself, oh how could this be,
That no where in this world is there a place for me.
Author notes
option 2... No place in this world for me
Ive felt like this all too often
A contest entry
- lets do this by AngelDreamer.
433 points, ended June 24, 2007, 15 entries
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Just impressive..A lonely soul looking for a place that belongs to and finally realizing God didn't create it any.
Feeling different..lonely.Expecting nothing but more loneliness,nothing but more sadness while people around grow stronger by finding partners to share them their life.
The last two lines are just wonderful..they seem so true.
You found the perfect end for your poem
Now you might be thinking"what a girl is this? talks too much!"I tell it's right when I read such wonderful poems
can't help it.
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did yo uforget to cap on perpose? have you found the answer yet, I want to know if you did.
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this is a great poen i love the last part
" Then I ask myself, oh how could this be,
That no where in this world is there a place for me"
so true i can relate, great job and good luck in my contest
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