People look at her
Not realizing she's
Hiding things deep down
They think she's normal
But don't know the things
She's gone through
No one can see
The marks under her hair
The scars on her wrists
The wounds on her heart
The dried tears on her face
No one can hear
Her ear-piercing screams
Her pitiful cries for help
Her heart-breaking pleas
Her dying sobs
Inside she's trying to
Let everything out
Trying to get help but
Failing miserably
Her secrets can kill her
Slowly and painfully
She's needing help
She's ebbing away
Each little tear is
A piece of her falling
Into a dark abyss of death
There is no life saver
To be there for her
So she'll die alone
Author notes
Hope you like it!
A contest entry
- lets do this by AngelDreamer.
433 points, ended June 24, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Time For You To Take A Chance ~ Round One by Tears and Raine.
320 points, ended January 26, 2008, 170 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Welcome to the finalists.
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this is a verry dark wright, but it is comunicated well, i love the part "No one can see
The marks under her hair
The scars on her wrists
The wounds on her heart
The dried tears on her face"
expesholy about the dried tears, i can relate to that, aney way great job and thank for entering my contest
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Awwww
this is just sad,yet beautifully written.Your emotional pain flows within this write.I know that it is a contest write and I wish you luck,but I feel this write is drawn from your own personal inflictions of pain in life.
Deeply moved me...
Blessings sis
your big sister
~Cheryl~
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is she hostage in Saudi Arabia?
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I hope you know this made me cry. This is exactly how I feel. I'm so glad that you wrote this poem. I know what you are saying. Love ya and good write!
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Lovely write. Although it is so sad but very well written. I can feel the pain and distraught that is coming from the words in this poem. Really great job keep it up.
-Never give up
-Katie
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