Have you ever wondered how i feel
Have you ever wondered what those tears meant
Have you ever wondered why i kept so quiet
Have you ever wondered why i don't bother
Have you ever wondered why i stay away
Have you ever wondered how i spent my days
Have you ever wondered what i said
Have you ever wondered where i am
Have you ever wondered if i was alone
Have you ever wondered if i was lonely
Have you ever wondered if there was something wrong
Have you ever wondered if my haert was filled with pain
Have you ever wondered if my life was dust
Have you ever wondered my heart was broken in half
Look Into My Eyes
And You Will See everything
Author notes
Nope no note for me....
A contest entry
- lets do this by AngelDreamer.
433 points, ended June 24, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The silent, shadowy, snowy, somberness of solitude.
The best part is when misery comes for company, it brings a loud, blinding, burning, raging fire with it.
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wow this is really deep. nice poem it has alot of emotion in it. very nice write. keep up the good work
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this is a great concept for a poem but the repeditive have you ever wonderd is a bit much, i loce the ending though "Look Into My Eyes
And You Will See everything"
so true, aney way i don mean to seem tough but i beleve the first part of the poem would flow nicer if you took out have you ever wonderd from the begining of some of the lines and make it flow in to echother more, but thats just me, any way great job and good luck in my contest
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wow
This is really good, I understand everything you put out there perfectly. -
repetitive, but, I like. good luck
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Wow I reaaly like this poem in so many ways it describes how I feel about my life and everyday struggles. Sometimes I think no one cares really they ask but its like they are just trying to be kind. I guess thats where your true friends come in at. The ones who really know how you are and what you really feel. Very nice write
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