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Insane!

I'm Insane! Well thats what they think!
They drugged me up and gave me a shrink!
I am not mad, just very very sad,
I have seen so much, it's all been bad!
How can I pretend it's not there?
It happened, but it's too much to bear!
I see the blood, my mother he took.
My cats he slaughtered and hung on the hooks!
The big old clock that struck the hour,
when he pinned me down and took my power!
I don't want this to rule my life,
but it's all to much, it cuts like a knife.
I will be free, that's my aim.
I will take my time I have so much to gain!


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YOU WON'T WIN YOU SAD BASTARD!

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  • MissWings
    June 4, 2007

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    My Angel, you are getting better.. you say you won't let him win and I know you won't.
    I love you.
    Emmy xXx


  • Glasyalabolas
    June 4, 2007
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    No-one should ever let those win who bring us down.


  • stevens5613
    June 3, 2007
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    sorry forgot to give you applause lol.

  • stevens5613
    June 3, 2007
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    Powerful

    Wow powerful poem, Extremly powerful this is an amzing poem, and well i have read your profile so have an idea what this is about. But as you said yourself if you let it take over you then he has won more then he could have imagined. hope all becomes well,
    Bright blessings from the goddess onto you,
    Blessed be
    Chris