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Nature's Metronome




Willows
weave words
with wooded wisdom




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A contest entry

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  • Billbard silver member
    June 9, 2007

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    Yhanks a lot for your entry into my Alliterative Haynaku Contest.I hope you enjoyed writing as much as i did reading it


    • cutiepie gold member
      June 9, 2007
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      I very much enjoyed this first attempt, hope I did not disgrace too much


  • wattle silver member
    June 3, 2007

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    Ms Cutie, a cricket death poem for sure (you know I'm crazy). --- Very nice mood painting. --- Thank you.


    • cutiepie gold member
      June 3, 2007
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      Lol..I think we all are a little crazy Thank you my friend for reminding me


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    June 3, 2007

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    Hello dear friend! It is wonderful to stop by on your poetry after a long long time. Hope all's well! I love your haynaku for it is deep and resonating. Lovely choice of words and excellent imagery!

    Charishma


    • cutiepie gold member
      June 3, 2007
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      Thank you sweetie ...it is lovely to see your words and feel your smile


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 2, 2007
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    Very nice indeed! A beautiful image...


  • Q45moh
    June 2, 2007

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    Sweet

    I love this. Very tight and simple and makes total sense. Very well done.
    Good Luck in the contest.

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