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I miss you

I miss you
Such empty words
A mere nicety
A white lie to the one I love

I ask you
How can you miss
Someone who is always in your mind?

When I close my eyes
I see you
When I dream
I see you

So how can I miss you?
If I never leave you

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 3, 2007

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    hmmmm, you know that is a good point at the end

    So how can I miss you?
    If I never leave you

    this poem is just soemthing else, and i like that about it, keep it flowing


  • moment liver
    June 2, 2007

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    Didn't say this to you at the time but this fits me perfectly. I say I miss you to a ton of people and lie each time. I always saying more in the words but people unable to see it. I love it. And love you too!

    Skylar