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little words of happiness

little words of happiness are edging in the window- trying to escape the rain of fear that's pouring down- trying to bring out the sun for one final day of brightness- before like hope they all die away- pleads of fear and joy and pain echo through the abyss- telling me go on it's fine- i take the words and take your hand- now sure that it is mine.

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  • twinkling of an eye
    August 6, 2007
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    Very nice imagery, I like it!


  • DevinCora
    July 22, 2007
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    Short and Sweet...sorta

    ~DevinCora


    • GreenKat92
      July 22, 2007
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      lol- thanks!!

      I don't know why, but I love writing dark romantic poems than light ones, they interest me more in a way, ya know?? lol!!

      much luv~
      kitty