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[ The man of my dreams, ]

The man of my dreams,
The man of my life,
I'm so madly in love,
love at first sight.

I want to go to him,
To be in his arms,
Cause only there,
Will i never be harmed.

I love you so much,
we've been through the crap,
And now i am longing,
I want you back.

Baby, your everything,
I could ever want,
And when I'm not with you,
All my dreams you haunt.

Author notes

yeah i had to ramble...so its just a rough draft...anyhow...one of my first love poems...wow...never thought i'd be writing a love poem...

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  • imegrant wolf
    June 3, 2007

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    when i am reading this poem .... every cell in my body moves ...each breath going away somewhere where my love is ... you are amazing ...you could make sooo maney things inside me just move with your amazing words ...becouse ..i'm really madly in love too ..thank you for sharing this with us ....