Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Don't need him

Don't need his kiss,
Don't need his hugs,
Don't need his comfort,
Don't need his smile.
You don't need him
Can't you see?
He used you,
He beat you,
He raped you.
Now you need to think,
Do you want a broken heart?
Do you want suicided?
Do you want bruises?
Do you want tears,
Mixed in blood?
Find someone you can trust,
Someone you love.
Than you can be truly happy.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Aurora Ceres
    June 2, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Very powerful. How sad that someone would feel inclined to love one that has hurt them in such a way. Very disturbing. One thing....last line...trurley, should be truly. Other than that, very nice job.