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Lonely?

I have you mum, my inspiration
the one i aspire to be like
I'm so proud of you mum, your truely sensational
Everything that is loving, caring, unselfish - my idol

I have you dad, my role model of what a man should be
The one I want to be proud of me
I'll do anything for you, so loving, mum's rock
I will make you're dream come true
You will walk me down that church aisle someday
I will provide you with the grandchildren that you crave

I have you brother, my partner in crime
Willing to do anything for each other
Mum and dad are proud because of the loving bond that we share
My baby brother, so many struggles faced, you are so strong

I have you nana, ill at health but remaining feisty
You make us all laugh with your dry humour and wit
You perished when grandpa died, but still you fight
Refuse to show and weakness, unforbidden woman.

I have you Stephen, since you came into my life
i have bloomed, I have suffered, loved and I have hurt
I owe you my life, I owe you my soul
It's yours I give it willingly

Am I lonely? Of course not

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  • Gemini5510
    June 3, 2007

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    This is beautiful, so emotional and totally from your heart babe. You have an amazing family and this really shows how much they mean to you. So many people do not appreciate their family or what they do for them until they are no longer in their lifes, look after them and be there for them when they are in need x


  • scullion
    June 2, 2007

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    this is a passionate poem filled with roar emotion and love im so proud of you beautiful for being so strong and you never have to worry about being lonly again as im here to stay forever you will walk down that aisle to me smiling and filling up as im so lucky to have you my rock my soul my life i love you hayley xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


  • moment liver
    June 2, 2007
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    lol, I love it. The ending made me grin. I just love it babe.