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emotions



emotions
encroach endlessly
eliciting extreme expectations



A contest entry

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  • Mrs D
    July 9, 2007
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    GREAT ALLITERATION!!!!!


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    June 14, 2007
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    What do you have to be so friggin' amazing! Everything you write is genius. I love the alliteration! The words that you used work so perfectly together. You get a 10 out of 10 from me.

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker who lost all

  • Billbard silver member
    June 9, 2007

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    Thank you very much for your entry in the Alliterative Haynaku Contest.I hope you enjoyed writing the poem as much as I did reading it


  • LAPoe gold member
    June 4, 2007

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    Exceedingly
    excellent, example
    expertly executed, encore!!!
    Well done Mr.C, I read your mind all over these
    words... Perfect! laurie.


  • intanglio2ring
    June 3, 2007

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    Extreme!

    One could get caught up in this one!
    Wonderful entry!
    Tang


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    June 3, 2007

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    Interesting! You leave the reader in a world of wonder where he keeps wondering what these emotions were and what were the extreme expectations that have happened. Enjoyed the alliteration and subject matter.
    One can taste shock and sorrow in your poem.

    Charishma


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 2, 2007
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    Well done!


  • Mrs Mulholland
    June 2, 2007

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    I see you have written 240 poems in four or five months. That is quite an output, an average of 2-3 per day. I hope some are longer than this one! Although the words are well chosen. My own emotional state is a bucket of shit at the moment.

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