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Dandy

Flying through the air

Speeding like a race car with wings

 

Flying ahead of his flock

Showing off just for me

 

He's not an eagle

Or a duck

He doesn't belong to a flock of geese

 

He's a pigeon named Dandy

My best friend

He loves me

 

Some people may think I'm crazy

For having such a pet

But seriously, he's smart

He's the one that knows me the best

 

If I'm sad or upset

He'll let me know he's there

Sitting on my shoulder

Pecking at me and cooing in my ear

 

He didn't grow up in a farmers' barn

He's an extraordinary bird

Dandy is a pure bred Racing Homing Pigeon

He actually races; he's no ordinary bird

 

With his dark blue check feathers

And glowing maroon eyes

 

With his perfect ten flight wings

He's beautiful, especially when he's flies

 

His waddle on his beak

Looks astonishing; quite exquisite

He's so proud of the way he looks

I'm sure if he could, he would admit it

 

His band number is 5356

This band of his is on his left leg

I'm sure of it

 

Dandy's not the prettiest pigeon

In our loft of many

But he's beautiful in my eyes

I give you my word on it

 

Flying through the air

Speeding like a race car with wings

 

Flying ahead of his flock

Showing off just for me

 

He's not an eagle

Or a duck

He doesn't belong to a flock of geese

 

He's a pigeon named Dandy

My best friend

He loves me

 

Author notes

http://desmoore.tripod.com/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/s_a_dark_check2.jpg
Go to this link to see a pigeon that looks similar to my pigeon Dandy if you're curious.
Oh, and if anyone is curious about Homing Pigeons, feel free to ask me about them!

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  • trista gold member
    June 5, 2007

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    I really love this poem. It shows how much you care about Dandy and describes him very well. I think it would be really hard to let one of your favorite pigeons race, because sometimes they don't make it home again. You know...your cat would be mighty upset to find out you chose a bird over her as your favorite pet to describe. But I promise I won't tell.

    Great job with this, Hon. Good luck in the contest!

    Love and s
    ~J.


  • a blooming rose
    June 5, 2007
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    i like the parts where u say He's not an eagle or a duck. It's great!!!

  • Breelynn
    June 2, 2007

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    Unique

    I am surprised to have a submission about such an unusual pet as the first (and so far, only) poem in this contest. It is not a very common thing to have pigeons as pets. (At least not in Oklahoma where I live)
    I like the way you have described him so thoroughly, and the picture is a perfect addition.
    These lines:

    With his dark blue check feathers
    And glowing maroon eyes

    give us a glimpse at Dandy. I don't think I have ever seen an animal with "glowing maroon eyes".

    I love these lines:
    His waddle on his beak
    Looks astonishing; quite exquisite
    He's so proud of the way he looks
    I'm sure if he could, he would admit it

    but I am not sure what the "waddle on his beak" is. I like the words you have used to describe it though -astonishing and exquisite.
    The lines about him being proud of his looks made me smile. It makes me picture him strutting around showing off his beauty for all to see.

    Concluding this poem by repeating the opening verses is a very nice way to bring the piece full circle. I truly enjoyed reading this. Thank you for entering my contest.

    Till next time,
    Breelynn