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Silent Space Sentinels

StarsİLady Dragonwyck  (A Haynaku style -  2 June 2007)

A contest entry

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  • Billbard silver member
    June 9, 2007

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    Thank you very much for your entry in the Alliterative Haynaku Contest.I hope you enjoyed writng it as much as I did reading it.


  • queens1
    June 3, 2007
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    Delightful

    Wonderful descriptions of the stars! Loved the silent sentinels as objects of wonder.
    Patty


  • wheezyanna
    June 3, 2007
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    suitably sibilant - superb
    salutations
    Anne


  • intanglio2ring
    June 3, 2007

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    Oooo Spacy!

    Clever write for our solar friends!
    Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    June 3, 2007

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    WOW! That is a GORGEOUS description of the little delights that twinkle all night while we sleep peacefully and float in dreamland Enjoyed your lovely haynaku. Great choice of words! Love the sentinels bit loads!

    Charishma


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    June 2, 2007

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    Very beautiful work here!
    Well done and best of luck
    to you with it in the contest!
    Keep up the wonderful work here!



    Jeremy0826

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