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The tree has fallen
My strength failed
I've been pushed down
this is the last..

The last time i help grow a tree
They always die as just a leaf

I'm done, for life
I'm moving on,
past this confusion,
unless nature speaks back
and tells me what happened

Until then, my hope is..
Endangered for now..

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  • Plastic Dreams
    June 2, 2007

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    Im not exactly sure how to divide my attention into your verses. I do enjoy the symbolism/metaphorical approach. It is true of all life that which dies will always undergo an rebirth. well done.