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Prayer of Gratitude

When the sun sets
Over mountains, hollow
Under your loving guidance
Know I’ll always follow;
And with hands that
Cradle raging storm strikes
You called me to life and
For your love I’ll gladly fight;
Though I sin and
I’ve been condemned, dirty
You would still be my Father
And every day you love me;
And when the moon
Rises for the last time
I will be here waiting
To give you my life.

Till you give me the Sign
Every day that's still mine
No matter where I roam
I'll be waiting for you
And the day that I go home...

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My favorite bit of work. Thank you God-I'll love you always.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 7, 2007

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    Till you give me the Sign
    Every day that's still mine
    No matter where I roam
    I'll be waiting for you
    And the day that I go home...

    Thank to you too my friend for such a heart warming poem here..