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Wondering mind,
pondering thoughts,
am I one of a kind ~

Bewildered,
confused,
walking alone,
my shadow and me,
is all I can see ~

Laying down to think,
and looking to the sky,
rubbing my eyes,
cant believe what I see ~

Spotting my brother,
my sister and me,
then,the whole family ~

Now I know
where to look ~

Seeing the past,
is only the beginning ~

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My Thoughts About My Family ~

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  • yellowrose190
    June 2, 2007

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    Bewildered,
    confused,
    walking alone,
    my shadow and me,
    is all I can see ~

    I love this part ^...beautiful poem. very well written. i like the rhyme in it too, it adds a nice flow to it.