maybe words
won't define me as i thought.
i've never been too solvable,
and honestly
i'm not that sort
of game.
i'm polarized,
and victimized by sleep;
it's the curse
of three a.m.
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I loved it. If you know a bit about me, you would know why
Well expressed. I hope you are doing great.
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awwwwww, i took this to be sad and very lonely....
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three a.m. has been beautifully pictured in about the amount of time before the reader begins drifting off because it's three a.m.
always a pleasure.
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strong write. i like this!
i'm polarized,
and victimized by sleep
suits me too! thank you for sharing this, keep writing! God bless you always
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must find the silver lining in every cloud...some folks wants to be this. interesting read. good job with writing this. enjoyed.
blu
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i like this- love the first two stanzas - love "i'm not that sort of game" - wonder if the final stanza is necessary as you have 3am in the title? - just a thought on a really good, strong poem.
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this is really nice
al
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