The thunder brings the storm,
I cuddle into my blanket
To hide and to stay warm.
Author notes
This is officially the shortest poem I have ever written!
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Comments
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I love it. I love storms and being inside under my duvet. Really good read for such a short poem. thanks for sharing! xox

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This is a nice poem, it's short but perfect. Nice job. I have a feeling there is a symbolic/metaphoric meaning to this poem, a strong one...
..I must be the storm.


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very short and VERY sweet!



